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suntanned skin turned blackened gray
golden hair turned white
childish dreams of darkened lands
a future they find bright
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"O sages come and help us build
a land of eco dark...
The world is but a plaything
for our Precurian ark!"
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they laugh at all our childish fears
and hatred of their blackened might
the sibling lovers smile
for there's dark in every light
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"Who are you to tell us
what is wrong and what is right?
You cannot hope to understand
the dark in which we find delight!"
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dear sages of the dark beware
the body's slow decay
watch o'er the product of your deeds
before it fades away
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the Acherons are full of love
with hearts stained through with black
and hidden sorrow shall fill the land
when they fall at the hands of Jak
©2007-2009 ~Myew-chan
:iconmyew-chan:

Author's Comments

My poem about Gol and Maia Acheron from the game Jak and Daxter. Finally finished it...though I still think it needs some work, at least I'm mostly satisfied with how it's turned out.

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:iconjaklover101:
cool poem! I'd dive 5 kudos!

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"I've got the caffeine patch! Each patch is the equivalent amount of twelve cups of coffee! You can stay awake for days with no side effects! AAGGHHH! Sorry!"
:iconmyew-chan:
Thanks! :aww:

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"就算这条命毫无义也好." -某个老头子
:iconnashidesei:
This is FANTASTIC. Just brilliant. It gave me shiiiivers of aaaaawesome. :D

...Can I post it on ~AcheronFans? Pretty please?

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I want a fanclub. Or maybe just a fan and a club to beat people into submission with. Yeah...
:iconmyew-chan:
Thanks! I'm glad you love it so much; I was afraid it wouldn't work out. ^^;

Of course you can post it! I've got no objections whatsoever! ^^

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"就算这条命毫无义也好." -某个老头子
:iconclefj:
Needs more loving comments. This was great, excellent use of sweet poetic ... stuff. That I like.

Sort of like a Louis Carol poem. ^-^ tis great!

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"Plagiarism is an academic Crime, it is punishable by academic Death!"
:iconmyew-chan:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. ^^

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"就算这条命毫无义也好." -某个老头子
:iconottsel-paws14:
that was THE best jak-and-daxter-world themed poem i have EVER read

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February 19, 2007
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